Friday, July 27, 2012

Me, Myself And I Comments

Rating: 5.0

My first breath in earth,
Was hard, trying to exhale the unknown air,
And trying to scream, to warn the nurses that I'm alive,
And from being cold, away from my warm,
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Mussia M Bronstein
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Valerie Dohren 27 July 2012

Very poignant and moving write - you are a lovely young person with a great philosophy and talent for writing. Well done. 10+++

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