Meeting And Following The Mermaids Poem by Justin Gildow

Meeting And Following The Mermaids

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Far away from land
I'm swimming under the sea
Looking for some sea treasures
Either hidden or out in plain sight
On the ocean's floor


As I swim about the sea
Looking on the ocean floor for conch shells
and rare pearls
I feel a tap on my shoulder
And I about jump out of my skin
But I quickly go calm and turn around
And I look at you and your mer sisters
Smiling and looking at me

Being amazed yet stunned
You all are a beauty to behold
And I'm stuck in a dream-like state

You all start to swim ahead
And a few of you wave your hands to me
to follow
Looking all around me
And still perhaps in a state of disbelief
I abandon all reality
And I follow all of you
Swimming under the sea
While wondering what's waiting for you all
And wondering what's waiting for me
Up ahead

Sunday, January 30, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: disbelief,ocean,pearls,sea,swimming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhay Vignesh L 30 January 2011

impressive and well imagined.Escaping into a world far away from our busy existence

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Justin Gildow

Justin Gildow

Washington, PA
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