(be Strong Now) My Night With Her In August Poem by Justin Gildow

(be Strong Now) My Night With Her In August

Rating: 2.9


I can see the nightingale sing
Our love's more colorful than a starling
Take my hand, and be strong now, girl
Cuz it's our heart shaped world

My night with her in August
We saw the moon
We laid down on the ground
And let's pray
That this feeling won't leave us too soon

The stars are out
Out and about
And we see a shooting star
Above us as we look out there that far

The silver moon and the bright stars
And the beautiful twilight
And the wonderful starlight
They all shine in your heart
And show how special you really are

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Buried Alive 14 May 2011

i hope u live' happily ever after'. a wondrous poem, elegant simple sweet

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Angelic Warrior 08 September 2009

awwww...that's so sweet....such a beautiful write! beauty and peace with a hint of passion....truly a fantastic write! 10++

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Good, strong imagery, I'm glad I got to read this.

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L G 27 January 2008

Wow, I love how you capture the moment.

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Justin Gildow

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