Melissa Poem by Rebekah Gamble

Melissa



An ivory goddess
lies on a white-washed grave.
Her raven hair
sweeps the dead
and flatters them to blushing.
My dear dark goddess,
may I hear your song?
Even nightingales of glass
can not compete
with your perfect song.
A cry is heard
throughout the land
which rocks the nations
and crumbles skeletons
so that none but I am left standing
before her gem-like eyes.
'A glorious note' I murmur
until the pain is gone.

written 3.28.o5

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 23 February 2008

I think you have a way with phrases that makes it possible for you to write rhythm and rhyme. I cannot say this of all writers here. You just need to work on putting the phrases together so they have a common rhythm. I know it sounds difficult, but I believe you have the skill to do it. If you wish not to do so, I'll understand. GW62

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Rebekah Gamble

Rebekah Gamble

Pittsburgh, Penna., U.S.A.
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