Memoirs Of A Nightingale (P.31) Poem by Phoebe Lichten

Memoirs Of A Nightingale (P.31)

Rating: 5.0


It was late in the evening
As I worked in a fevered rushing way
Flowing in sync with the rain
The clapping storm that filled the day

I could not focus with thoughts of him
Sitting so close beside the hallway
The sounding thunder struck as I imagined
His warmth, his touch, immobilizing me as always

Thinking of my love, how my body ached
With strong desire, with such sweet pain
Wanting him near to my heart, so much
On that day filled with the sweet smell of rain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Blazo 19 August 2012

Nice imagery and the dark, but sexual feeling of the rain.

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Captain Cur 14 August 2012

Beautiful love poem filled with descriptive imagery and feeling. I liked the rain in the background unsettling, like the turmoil of emotions.

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