Mended Heart Poem by Rameeza Nasim

Mended Heart

Rating: 5.0


My Mended Heart
Is all set for its new ventures, to be played again
It is all set for restart
It still doesn't care about loss or gain
It is all set and ready
To be broken again.
As it is now capable
Of assembling back
all of its broken pieces.

Saturday, January 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 21 January 2018

Powerful and beautiful write, yes we can mend a broken heart and when we are strong enough we can go out and find love knowing it is a risk, there is no certainty but the wonder of our hopes and dreams that build us up and we can rebuild if we have to again!

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Rameeza Nasim 22 January 2018

really grateful for your feedback dear :)

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Rameeza Nasim 22 January 2018

really grateful for your feedback Thank you :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 January 2018

A good attempt in the chapter of the flexibility and restoration of a modern heart. Thanks for sharing this masterpiece.

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Rameeza Nasim 20 January 2018

very grateful your feedback always make my day thanks for your continuous support, I am carrying my poetry journey. :)

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Rameeza Nasim 20 January 2018

Thank you Your feedback means alot stay blessed Poet adaaab!

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