Rebeginning Poem by Rameeza Nasim

Rebeginning

Rating: 5.0


Let's begin
With a positive note
And a raised chin.

Let's show hate
The back gate
And embrace Compassion
Make it your passion.

Don't forget
To water your garden of Gratitude
Yes adopt that attitude.

Smile away
all your tears,
Brush off
all your fears.

You, Yourself is the affliction
Remember Life is a journey
Not a competition
So let's rebegin this beautiful journey.

Rameeza Nasim
08-01-2018

Monday, January 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beginning,motivational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 21 January 2018

Beautifully written Rameeza, we should be thankful for all we have and to love as hate breeds more hate and at times the affliction is ourselves.

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Rameeza Nasim 22 January 2018

yes true so lets rebegin this beautiful journey of life :) Thank you for your support

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Akhtar Jawad 20 January 2018

Remember Life is a journey Not a competition So let's rebegin this beautiful journey...Make co travelers happy and enjoy a happy journey, a message with an universal appeal.

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Rameeza Nasim 22 January 2018

Thank you sir for your valuable feedback :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 January 2018

Rameeza, wow.... such a heartwarming and inspiring words I’ve read today...a full mark of 10+++

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Rameeza Nasim 09 January 2018

O Thank you glad that it inspired you :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 January 2018

A beautiful restart of a sincere poetry, I think. A realistic approach is peeping through the wise lines. Thanks Rameeza.

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Rameeza Nasim 08 January 2018

Thankyou Jazib, feeling lost here hopefully will write more poems.

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