It was one dark night
moonless night
It rained
Rained
Rained like never before!
As if there was no sun afore!
The rain was more like pouring
It poured
Poured like a wild stream
It rained
Rained the whole night
But the Sun did shine
The next day
Brighter like never before!
13.01.2017
I've Bengalized (translated into Bengali) this beautiful composition/ poem for my native readers and they have appreciated it so much. This poem encourages its readers not to be disappointed, 'cause, after the dark night rain, yo see? there were the sun brighter than ever! Here is the mastery of this poem. Thanks dear poet, Rameeza Nasim, go ahead!
dark and moonlessnight it rained but the next day brighter like never before. ending the poem in a very positive note. that is our call. we poets should always give the world a positive note.. thank you God bless u dear poetess.
Grate transition between feelings, superb portrayal of feelings, Ramz
A confirmation of the adage that every cloud has a silver lining meaning. Using such profound analogy to portray heartbreak is not only appropriate, but poetically remarkable as well. Beautiful and motivational poem. Thanks for sharing Remeeza and do remain blessed.
It rained Rained Rained like never before! -I just appreciate the beauty of expression! An elegant piece of poetry!
thankyou Dr