Monday, November 16, 2009

Mental Examination Comments

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Can’t believe I found it standing
There just filling empty spaces
Inside my head’s pulsating mystique
Of crumbling under these stages.
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Christopher's Dead
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Sad but significant.

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Daniela Daraz 29 November 2009

Broken love is as unexplainable as love in itself, yet you do a good job of describing it.

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Chitra - 27 November 2009

another intense write from your creative quill! very well done!

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Teresa Tabo 16 November 2009

I really like this poem and your use of words. I like how it all leads up to the last line. Keep up the good writing! Thank you for sharing this with us!

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