Mera Dil Doobtey Doobtey Rehgaya Poem by me poet yeps poet

Mera Dil Doobtey Doobtey Rehgaya



Mera dil doobtey doobtey rehgaya

he took a long deep breath
aour mere saans
challe gayee

wow kaiseee
chillayeee
no one knows
except
me

I tightened
my tulips
no sound came
no one heard
but he did really
kill

the last shot
'twas
it

Thursday, April 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: boyfriend,girlfriend,language,love,poet,sex
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes
Just imagine
her ecstasy
between sheets
darkness of night
oooooo
what a delight
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 26 April 2019

In this sub-continent most of us speak a language that is called " Hinglish" , a language that is partly English and partly Urdu/Hindi. My fiend wrote this experimental poem in Hinglish (Hindi +English) , and it's a very good experiment.

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O POET ME POET 27 April 2019

Huzoor Sallaaamssssss and thanks for guidance

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Douglas Scotney 25 April 2019

'twas it is a tautology, mpyp. 'twas will do. Or was it.

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doug scotney 03 May 2019

the last shot 'twas it = the last shot it was it

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 April 2019

not clear do u stammer sorry

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