Friday, March 3, 2006

Mercedes Comments

Rating: 5.0

“Please God, buy me a Mercedes! ”
That’s the prayer that’s often heard
from penurious, lovely ladies,
and it’s surely not absurd.
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Hugh Cobb 03 March 2006

Gershon, Shalom! This is such a clever and well-executed poem. The metaphors get such great mileage too! I'd take a Toyota, too preferably an MR2 Spyder. The entire concept and expression is beautifully crafted. A wonderful and entertaining poem. Best regards, Hugh

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Patricia Gale 03 March 2006

Another classic Patricia

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Gina Onyemaechi 03 March 2006

Wow, you've got me raring to go now, Gersh! lol. A racy piece of writing (pun very much intended) . Warmest wishes (again!) , Gina.

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