Death's Shadow

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Mercy - Poem by Death's Shadow

Lay still and close your eyes,
I know it hurts,
I know you're scared.

Sleep tonight
and I'll end your pain.
I promise
I'll take you away.


Comments about Mercy by Death's Shadow

  • Kim Barney (12/13/2015 8:53:00 PM)

    Nicely done, except that the first word should be LIE instead of LAY. Sorry, I can't help it. I used to be an English teacher! (Report)Reply

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  • Mandi June (5/28/2013 9:47:00 PM)

    Simply terrifying and captivating! Great write! (Report)Reply

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  • Kelly Seale (5/28/2013 9:25:00 PM)

    oh, this was an unexpected peek into your sleepless nightmare world. I'm impressed with the feelings you conveyed in such a short space of time. Great Ink! ; -) Kelly. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 28, 2012



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