Thursday, September 11, 2008

Meritorious, Meritorious, Meritorious Comments

Rating: 4.9

On their chariots they loaded the thrakean uniforms,
with all the sketches and colours of their country,
the Monastery, the palm tree and the pine tree,
the partridge, the tree branch, the flower, the eagle,
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Joseph S. Josephides
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Chris Mendros 19 October 2008

there is so much there, i do not know where to begin. The imagery had me swimming in a sea, and i am still gasping for breath. Beautiful. cjm

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Kesav Easwaran 25 September 2008

A picturesque poem in paint color rhythm drawn in elegant lines that rhyme...a good read, Joseph...must rate this 10

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Wisdom leaps out from the pages of your pieces, this being no exception. Utterly engaging with its elegance and subtle rhyme scheme. t x

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Joseph S. Josephides

Joseph S. Josephides

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