vince gullaci

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Metaphorically Speaking - Poem by vince gullaci

I missed the rain
but the metaphorical hit
between the eyes
left me reeling
as I read the water smudged
calling card
of the wasting disease.

Topic(s) of this poem: life


Comments about Metaphorically Speaking by vince gullaci

  • (7/19/2019 10:49:00 PM)

    Thank you again Jez, a delightful comment to warm my heart.
    Best Wishes,
    Vince
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  • Jez Brul (7/18/2019 8:36:00 AM)

    lovely...just lovely short powerful write. A delight to read.10+++++++++++++ to my poem list (Report)Reply

    (7/19/2019 11:19:00 PM)

    Thank you for the comment Jez, I'm not sure if my thank you got through previously, so I'm
    sending it again,
    Vince.

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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (10/26/2017 5:50:00 PM)

    Such a brilliant write, Vince...10++++ (Report)Reply

    (10/28/2017 3:22:00 PM)

    Thank you for the comment, Bernard.Very generous comment,
    Vince.

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/26/2017 5:49:00 PM)

    This is wonderful and metaphoric poem you have shared here. Between eyes tear remain. An amazing poem is shared here...10 (Report)Reply

    (10/28/2017 3:26:00 PM)

    Great comment, Kumarmani.Thanking you,
    Vince.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 26, 2017



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