Metro Life Poem by abhipsa panda

Metro Life

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Lost in the speed of Metro,
Can't find time for oneself.
The mind reacts in the type of stereo,
Calling the home town for help.

Deadly are the life in cities,
Being stuck in daily traffic.
Though the car counts in comfort series,
Still it steals time very terrific.

I want to be pedestrian,
So,can walk in any tone.
Unlucky are the vehicles driven,
Whose time and petrol both gone.

Friday, October 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: city
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 14 November 2018

I want to be pedestrian, So, can walk in any tone. Unlucky are the vehicles driven, Whose time and petrol both gone. a very good way of thinking for oneself. i like to be a pedestrian....... then i have time for myself to reflect..... thank u. tony

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Abhipsa Panda 14 November 2018

I am grateful to you sir that you read my poem and commented on that...

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 October 2018

Wonderful sketch of city life! Liked the second stanza most! (10)

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Abhipsa Panda 12 October 2018

Thank you sir...feeling glad to read your comments..

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Gajanan Mishra 12 October 2018

deadly are the life in cities, true picture

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Abhipsa Panda 12 October 2018

Yes sir...Thanks for going through my poetry and commenting on that.

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