Relations Poem by abhipsa panda

Relations

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Relations are somehow refined,
to some boundaries they are confined.
Opening the gates we will find,
many new are waiting with blissful kind.

Sometimes we avoid, sometimes we accept,
some get broken, some are perfect.
In this small space of life's bucket,
affections are filled making emotions target.

Happiness is welcomed sequentially,
may be from any quarter gradually.
Life and relations being attached perpendicularly,
the bonding is based on contributions entirely.

Tuesday, November 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 12 November 2018

some get broken, some are perfect. In this small space of life's bucket, affections are filled making emotions target...beautiful expressions dear poetess Abhispa.. relationship defined so well. thank u. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 November 2018

beautiful versification on relationship- Life and relations being attached perpendicularly /// beautiful writings

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Abhipsa Panda 07 November 2018

Thank you sir for visiting my page and going through my writings

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Naila Rais 07 November 2018

So wonderful and true..... Naila

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Abhipsa Panda 07 November 2018

Thanks a lot dear naila for your comments....stay blessed

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Abhipsa Panda 07 November 2018

Thanks a lot dear naila...stay blessed always

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 November 2018

Such a beautiful poem indeed. Loved each stanza that has got nice message. 'Happiness is welcomed sequentially, may be from any quarter gradually. Life and relations being attached perpendicularly, the bonding is based on contributions entirely. '...is awesome. Keep inking and Happy Diwali.

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Abhipsa Panda 07 November 2018

Thank you so much sir......A very happy diwali to you too

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Bernard F. Asuncion 07 November 2018

Abhipsa, such a marvelous write.10+++++++++

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Abhipsa Panda 07 November 2018

Thank you so much sir for visitung my page and your words of appreciation

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