Dear God Poem by abhipsa panda

Dear God

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Dear God, was it your decision,
to place me in such situation?
Where every desire needs permission,
imprisoned me with silent agitation.

Throughout the day the time passes,
thinking of the beloved one.
Only togetherness the heart proposes,
but signal of privacy gives warn.

It's too hard to find,
a place in someone's heart.
I wish I can make a rewind,
and go back to the early cart.

The destiny always obstructs,
and insists me to stay calm.
But someone's treatment destructs,
our life flowing with charm.

Tuesday, February 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: complain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 24 November 2019

Well articulated and insightfully penned with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing, Abhipsa.

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Abhipsa Panda 25 November 2019

Thank you so much sir for going through my page....ur motivating words have inspired me a lot

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 02 April 2019

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 February 2019

complaining to GOD.....................! /// wonderful writings

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Abhipsa Panda 19 February 2019

Thank you so much sir for giving your valuable time to read my poem

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Bharati Nayak 19 February 2019

It's too hard to find, a place in someone's heart. I wish I can make a rewind, and go back to the early cart. - - - - Very often we want to go back in time when we see the present oppressive.We ask God why He put us in that situation.The feelings have been wonderfully expressed.

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Abhipsa Panda 19 February 2019

Thank you so much Mam for your kind visit to my page and appreciating my lines

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