Miles To Go Poem by Neela Nath Das

Miles To Go

Rating: 5.0


The flickering light
Calls me to join
The fest of life, fame
And the world of name.
I watch the light
And try to write
The story of my
Half-empty life.
I know
To touch it,
Miles to go.
Or, halfway done
I'll back
To sit before
My window.
The golden harvest
If grows here in
My land of creation,
It must reach there
Before I arrive on foot.
The sky, the cloud, the rain,
And my pent up pain,
Must get condensed
On the blank sheet
To be a universal poem.

Sunday, August 31, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Somanathan Iyer 02 September 2014

A nice poem echoing inner feelings. beautifully written!

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 September 2014

Fantastic poem Neela. I loved the beautiful lines...... The sky, the cloud, the rain, And my pent up pain, Must get condensed On the blank sheet To be a universal poem. I agree with Valsa's comment, this definitely is universal poem....... Loved the way you scripted each lines....

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Valsa George 01 September 2014

The sky, the cloud, the rain, And my pent up pain, Must get condensed On the blank sheet To be a universal poem. Beautiful lines.....! Then definitely it would be a UNIVERSAL poem!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 31 August 2014

Lifted nicely, smoothly The flickering light Calls me to join The fest of life, fame- -concluding Desir, hope and must say the soul of thepoem- The sky, the cloud, the rain, And my pent up pain, Must get condensed On the blank sheet To be a universal poem. 10

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