Milion Diamonds Can'T Withstand Before Your Smile Poem by Harindhar Reddy

Milion Diamonds Can'T Withstand Before Your Smile

Rating: 4.0


Unable
to withstand just
before your smile the sun,
moon and stars runs away
for cover - Spring
forgets
to trill
glancing at your
face - Greek god zephyr fails
to win your heart "O My
love, what have you
made me! "


###Copyright © Harindhar Reddy - 2015###

Sunday, February 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: romance
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cyclus: It is shape poem found in Pathways for a Poet, it attempts to create a cycling pattern by syllable count. It is attributed to Marvin Davis Winsett.
The Cyclus is:
a. a 12 line poem.
b. syllabic, syllables per line 2-4-6-6-4-2-2-4-6-6-4-2
c. unrhymed.

(Phoneme is the smallest unit of spoken language and they combine to a syllable, and syllables in words and so on. English speech sounds are divided into vowels and consonants. Further vowels are divided in to mono-thongs, diphthongs and triphthongs. I included diphthongs and triphthongs in a single syllable as one unit.)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 01 February 2015

A Fantastic poem with interesting topic. Loved reading it.

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Harindhar Reddy 19 May 2020

I'm grateful for your amazing review on the poem 🙏🙏👍👍

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 February 2015

To win your heart oh my love. Really wonderful poem shared on.

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Harindhar Reddy 19 May 2020

Thank you for your amazing review 🙏🙏👍👍

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