Mind Music - Orbits Poem by Clive Culverhouse

Mind Music - Orbits

Rating: 5.0


orbits
we surf
the sun
this
orb its
golden
loot of
treasure
or bits
of gathered
thoughts
in their
orbits

Wednesday, November 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Check out more word play poetry in my Mind Music poems.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clive Culverhouse 08 October 2023

I put this poem on PoetrySoup, here's a comment 'evocative in its brevity, cleverly spun. i liked this.'

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