Saturday, December 28, 2013

Mind, The Mother Of All Mess - I Comments

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My hands clutching tight years gone by and dead,
I mull old memories, do day-dreaming,
Hold eager hands cupped to catch those ahead,
That time I've none for the moments fleeting.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2019

The subject matter is well related to the poem's title " Mind, The Mother Of All Mess. Nice expression. I cite....A dream of joy to cherish forever! / I've heard this sure and often times before, / And still find me farming my fields of yore. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 October 2019

I am elated with your appreciating words, dear poet.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 October 2019

Old Memories of love and life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 October 2019

Thanks for visiting this poem dear EKL.

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