Mirror Poem by Katie Huntress

Mirror

Rating: 4.5


i see in the mirror this face of a girl,
i see something troubling her,
but she does not speak,
she is withdrawn,
her eyes are puffy,
her face is pale,
she doesn't know what to do,
all she can do is cry,
she needs help, she tries to scream,
but she doesn't have enough power to do so,
her eyes are deep and dark,
she is hinding something,
i can tell,
i wish i could help,
i see in the mirror of a girl, which is me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 07 November 2005

Hi Katie, it's part of growing up I'm afraid, the thing to remember is, tomorrow is always another day, clean slate and all that! You are lucky you are young enough to to cope with feeling like that, try being my age! lol 8 from me. All the best Tai

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Vanessa Brown 07 November 2005

ooooooh, nice poem katie! its pure uninhibited raw emotion, its good stuff...a flow of words. i rly like what you're saying, becausei feel like that sometimes...i really hope u feel better soon tho! ! cheer up :)

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