Sunday, November 8, 2009

Miss You 2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

I miss you every morning
now that you have gone.
I miss your sweet kisses
from your ruby red lips on mine
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David Harris
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Stephen Stirk 20 November 2009

A heart rending write David. Such sadness and poignancy within. It seems that you can write on any subject. I have thoroughly enjoyed reviewing your poems today. Pity to end on such a sad note Take Care and Best Regards Steve 10

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Patti Masterman 08 November 2009

It's hard to lose the great love of your life. Every day you keep living is sort of an accomplishment, all by itself.

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Carol Gall 08 November 2009

the feelings expressed are written so well david 10

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Kranthi Pothineni 08 November 2009

Painful write so is the title. But your write is expressive.

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Ellie Sutton 08 November 2009

i love how sincere this is. you've hidden nothing and the result is beautiful. thank you for sharing. great piece

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Tsira Goge 08 November 2009

Remarkable melancholy for relatives..10.... Tsira

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Catrina Heart 08 November 2009

poignant poem it is....I could imagine how she feels since to lost one's love one is really such devastating. Great poem.......

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David Harris

David Harris

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