If you didn't see what happened that night, when I stood all alone beside your bed,
I'm writing this now so you get to read, every little thing that went on inside in my head.
I drew the curtains and latched the door, I didn't want anyone to hear what I had to say,
The only exception would have been you, but you couldn't hear me now anyway.
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It would be endless if we write about mom shamir!but i got it, how hard it would be for you to stop!! Stop somewhere where everthing is lost But yeah you are surely brave enough to stencil this all in short!
I just saw two of your videos on youtube 1.why I do not fall in love 2.a man of few words....and those two videos made me to search for you on Google and first link I got this...surprisingly I found you in the same site I use to write on......this poem of your bought tear in my eyes........each and every pain is so hard but the pain we get when we loose some one we love kill us silently each and every second god give us....jab koi chala jata hai tab itna dard nhi hota, dard tab hota hai jab hame pata chalta hai ki wo kbhi laut kar wapas nhi ayega....have a great time and life ahead shamir....may god bless you :)
Dear Jeanine, thank you so much for the heartfelt praise. I'm really glad you could relate to it, very few can read this and understand what the pain of losing someone so important really feels like. Thanks again. :)
This was so beautiful Thank you so much for sharing. I can imagine how hard it was to put these words on paper, Bless your heart. I lost my mom as well so I share that deep pain. I hope that your healing process as gotten a little easier. Again thanks for sharing. Jeanine
Oh dear, this is really beautiful..i love this much..emotional, loving and touching...i give u the best vote..loved it_Soul
This poem was literally touching. I almost ended up crying after. Brilliant, Just brilliant
To everyone who found the time to read through the poem and give such wonderful feedback, I thank you all from the bottom of my heart. This poem means the world to me, the person in the poem means even more than that to me. I'm extremely grateful :)
The poem touched my heart. It evoked intense feelings of grief. A wonderful narration of the poet's inner feelings. Well done.
Where I come from it is said when your father dies you are half an orphan but when your mother dies even if your father is still alive you are a complete orphan. In other words, losing a mother is very hard irregardless of your age or circumstance. Your poem reminds me of that. It's a very beautiful poem. Sorry for your loss. I want you to know I added it my favorite poem list because it has touched me in many ways.
Heartfelt and i feel sad a bit, emotional write to me....am i too sensitive hahahaha...nice nice work! _Soul
U are a darling god bless u