Mom- I Love U. Poem by shyam balaji

Mom- I Love U.



The time when I laid on your laps, mother,
of the outside world I lest bother
That's time I was four.
You bet me, chided me, advised me,
That was all in the world I knew.
I cared in this world for nothing
except to ride a bicycle I had training
That was time I was nine.
I found the world a mystery,
for you provided me the glossary.
Unknowing what causes why I found myself crazy
for then you taught me the lessons of life
That's time I was eleven.
Clearing all the downsides of me,
with a pride eye you see.
Now I learnt the world well mother
to write a poem on you, the words slither
and its time I am sixteen.
Thy soul being yours, I find
Thou art is so kind.

Saturday, November 29, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: crazy,time,world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dulakshi Wakista 20 February 2010

You've expressed and showed the bond of mother and child.Very lovely and heart touching poem.Indeed it's a great work.No one compare mother love to another. Great work! Nice piece.

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Sneha 'The Poetess' 17 February 2010

any poem written on the beauty of motherhood shud be applauded! ! ..... :) there's no love poem, nature poem, or even grievance poems that can come as close to wat a poem on motherhood can! ...

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Bistirna Barua 25 December 2008

a moving poem just like the song MAA in taare zameen par. Shyam really you are a poetical genius such fantastic word selection yet you retain the soul of the poem, your simplicity binds me.you rock

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Vidhya 01 23 December 2008

wonderful........very good work.........i really enjoyed ur poem......

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