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Mom, You Were

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Mom, you were
Sunday,24th Oct 2021
Mom, you were always right
whether I remained wrong or right
there was no fight at all
all depended on your being well
I held your finger
whenever I went over
to cross the road there
I had no fear in mind
one morning I found you not with me
everything is running with weeping tears
I sensed hidden fear
some tears dropped
I found myself alone
the cover was gone
I looked at her silent face
telling me as if I have a critical phase
The sky loomed large with dark clouds
it sounded danger
for a motherless child
to find something in a hollow world
I asked stars
why did you take away mom and taken far
what was such a necessity?
was there no one to be preferred by an almighty?
Mom was an angle
and hoped it was the case with other people too
Now I realized how was she loved by all
and how it grave to witness a fall!
Dr Hasmukh Mehta
D.Litt, Folt
World poet laureate
Copy right Hasmukh A Mehta

Mom, You Were
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Now I realized how was she loved by all and how it grave to witness a fall! Dr Hasmukh Mehta D.Litt, Folt World poet laureate Copy right Hasmukh A Mehta
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2021

Author Hasmikh Mehta Wow Humanity First So touching

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2021

Author Hasmikh Mehta Wow Layeba Layeba

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2021

Hasmikh Mehta welcome. Ouley Bah

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2021

Hasmikh Mehta welcome.. Faith Mwirumubi

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2021

Hasmikh Mehta welcome.. Aluina Hingleu

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 October 2021

thank you for this warm poem. I just lost my mother and I felt a great calm come over me after I read it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2021

Hasmikh Mehta Ouley Bah.. welcome n tks

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2021

· Reply · 1 d Nageld Riarute Absolutely beautiful poem nice writeup post ?? · Reply · 1 d

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2021

asmikh Mehta welcome..Maria Asis ·

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 October 2021

· 1 d Ouley Bah So beautiful ?? man

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