Urshula Davis

Rookie - 99 Points (August 15 1995 / SC)

Moment - Poem by Urshula Davis

I caressed your hair
Watched you fall asleep
above the fold of me



I kiss you without lips
I make love to you without becoming woman





Thought of you
Missed you in your presence





Craved you when drowning in you
when dying in you



Cried on you with dry tears



Thought you could hear



Thought you could hear





Speak up?
Not would I


Comments about Moment by Urshula Davis

  • (8/24/2012 7:48:00 PM)


    Sparse meaningful, very nice job. (Report) Reply

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  • Saadat Tahir (8/18/2012 4:29:00 PM)


    nice lines....they pauses add great effect..... :)
    Passionate fervent....strong

    liked em
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  • Marcus Mckinley (8/12/2012 11:38:00 PM)


    a moment of worship is a moment of solice. ever present in the doubts of self are the beliefs we hold the strongest. nicely done (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 12, 2012



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