Mongoose And King Cobra Poem by elysabeth faslund

Mongoose And King Cobra

Rating: 5.0


I dance in a circle tonight,
In a garden under that
Silver,

Which betrayed your scales
To me. Your eyes and
Intent.
Your coldness.

I dance around you laughing,
Tonight.
Do you watch my eyes,

And their intent? Do you hear
My warm blood beating with
Your death?

Sunday, April 22, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: coldness,dance,silver
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walt Martin 20 June 2007

... a near perfect (to my minds eye) poem, metaphorically thin as it should be so as to not mask the sent of distant spice on the far wind - Wonderful! ! !

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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