Monsoon In Mumbai -Tanka Poem by narayana aghalaya

Monsoon In Mumbai -Tanka



MONSOON IN MUMBAI
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in reckless.city
lady slips.at pothole, crushed
by bus, a pity
with death, road-users, get brushed
'safe' is said but can't hide blush

men with feet of clay
rule the roost in Bombay,
have nothing to say
when.city on its knees prays
to 'end this.havoc, rain plays'

'set the system right'
on this our.leaders sit tight
as they are not bright
fault lines - clear as daylight
blind minds can't sight public.plight

can their heads be rolled?
doesn't help much - I am told
good fruits can't be sold
the rotten guys have much hold
on how public can be.fooled

this vast hub.hosts crores
their plight- does grief out-pour?
the problems cry hoarse
the leaders shut cocoons' doors
hope the thinking.minds.can pore
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Wednesday, July 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: death,rains,urban
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
brush with death- an experience when almost dies
pore-be absorbed in studying
cocoon-If you are living in a cocoon, you are in an environment
in which you feel protected and safe, and sometimes isolated from everyday life.
rule the roost- to be the person who makes all the decisions in a group
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 11 July 2018

nicely depicted the scenery of urban in in the rainy season and the real mood of so called leader! - 'set the system right' on this our.leaders sit tight as they are not bright fault lines - clear as daylight blind minds can't sight public.plight nice

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narayana aghalaya 11 July 2018

Thanks, dear reader!

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