Monsoon Musings Poem by indira babbellapati

Monsoon Musings

Rating: 4.3


…and on this
cool cloudy monsoon morning
as you strolled at a distant
horizon along the
village bunds and canals
wandered across the
native soil preparing
itself for the next sowing
i opened the door to
a light-hearted wind that veiled me
from the rest of the world
it cast an alluring net
dabbed in the perfume of late
summer flowers soaked in the
damp rain-soaked earth
the endless tidings the waves
of wind whispered
tickled me enough
on the black sky
a lightning that flashed
pierced my heart like
a dagger of desire
the so far-longing leaves
in immobilizing passion
stirred occasionally in
an attempt to shake off
the beads of satiated desire
each time a thunder rolled
i hugged your invisible presence
in a teenage glee

a distant koel cooed
probably in adieu
proclaiming that it’s
after all early morning

19jun2010
06.40hrs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 19 April 2015

You have drawn the imagery of an early monsoon morning very neatly here. You wrote the poem almost five years ago, sitting God knows where, and you see how a distant reader is mused here, reading your poem. That is the beauty of poetry. It pleases parched hearts like the monsoon soaks the parched soil. 'each time a thunder rolled i hugged your invisible presence in a teenage glee' - So beautifully said, simply superb!

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Gita Ashok 06 July 2010

The imagery here is as refreshing as early morning is. Lovely write!

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a soft beautiful sensual poem from the heart mind hand of a beautiful poet

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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