Aiden Florence

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Monte Parfait - Poem by Aiden Florence

Memories relive
A beautiful moment
That no longer exist

Sunlight steaming through the leaves
Falling to the ground
Fashion a scenic view
Of a wonderful world we reside

Tears falling from heaven
Bring life to roses and thorns
That will soon relocate
From my hands to your heart

Our time together
Remain unharmed in such exquisite nature
Where hummingbirds and trees
Are adorning such mesmerizing scenery

I will take note
Of this wonderful day I spent with you
To communicate the beauty of this world
To the next generation
That won’t be able to see
All the beautiful things
That surrounded you and me


Comments about Monte Parfait by Aiden Florence

  • (7/7/2008 11:33:00 PM)


    ughh people make me sooo angry, this is a BEAITIFUL poem, why cant everyone see what i see?
    very good aiden, keep writing, makes me smile: :)


    x3,
    millie
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  • (6/18/2008 7:32:00 AM)


    very good. i love it. i dont really have a favorite part, i liked it all. lol. excellent writting. (Report) Reply

  • (6/17/2008 10:58:00 AM)


    oooooooooh I do really like this, especially this part:
    Tears falling from heaven
    Bring life to roses and thorns
    That will soon relocate
    From my hands to your heart

    good writing!
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 14, 2008



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