Aiden Florence

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You'Re Ever So Inviting - Poem by Aiden Florence

You’re constant welcoming is slowly burning down my heart
And it feels like a part of my soul is gone
Don’t make me feel so contradicting

Falling in to your arms at first sight
Only to realize that I’m drowning in a pool of misery

It can’t be helped
You’re invitiation is like a gateway to heaven
So irresistible and conning
And no more bactracking
Your world’s falling apart right before your eyes
And we still lie on the floor powerless and heartbroken

Tonight you’re here again standing so innocently
With an invitation to death row
Baptize me in blood and murder my mind
It’s not like your manifestation never won me over in the past

Now I can never explain how I feel inside
Our lives are nothing other than a cosmic disaster
Longing for a revolution in discontinued motion
Halfhearted paintings portray our dead passion

I finally taste and see the fragile connection breaking apart within our soul
Lack of prolixity and communication left this invitation meaningless
Like a broken mentality lacking reminiscence
So heartless and vain

You can do this night after night
Drag me down to heaven with your magnificence
Atleast it gives you a sense of what it feels like deep inside

Everything all around me is crumbling faster than I can take control
I’m finally feeling the pain as your invitation turns to dust
Before our time is up, let us escape to heaven
Pull me aside, leave my heart and soul scarless one last time


Comments about You'Re Ever So Inviting by Aiden Florence

  • (7/14/2008 5:10:00 PM)

    astonishing, beautiful, amazing, mesmerizing...
    very descriptive and very indepth,
    i love it...

    :)
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  • (10/23/2007 10:37:00 PM)

    love it. and love your use of words. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/8/2007 10:26:00 PM)

    Lovely, very strong words and emotions. Overall it's a wonderful peice. Im sorry if this comment isnt so great lol. I am exshausted. But I love this poem. It's great and I just feel that many others will love it too. Dont let anyone tell you that your work is over the top. Eccentric artist are always the best lol. Great work as always keep it up. Cant wait for your newest work! (Report)Reply

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  • (7/8/2007 10:26:00 PM)

    Lovely, very strong words and emotions. Overall it's a wonderful peice. Im sorry if this comment isnt so great lol. I am exshausted. But I love this poem. It's great and I just feel that many others will love it too. Dont let anyone tell you that your work is over the top. Eccentric artist are always the best lol. Great work as always keep it up. Cant wait for your newest work! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 4, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 19, 2011


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