Mood Music Poem by Fay Slimm

Mood Music

Rating: 5.0


Like efflorescence, night produces mood.
More blue than a cornflower summer sky.
Moods of the daytime too are luminous.
Your presence, though afar, creates them so.

Soft textured velvet is my mood today.
It sings me memory-tunes of your words.
Silence is heavy when poetry speaks.
I hear and catch it's music in my soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 23 August 2009

The music of your mood crosses all borders of time and distance. It is profoundly blue. How can your friend fail to be touched by its fragility. Lovely... As always, Sandra

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 23 August 2009

As a musician myself, I'd really want to feel your kind of mood music, so that I can get the mood, the right mood that all musician want, to compose a song.

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Tsira Goge 12 August 2009

Nice melancholy, Fay..10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Carol Gall 12 August 2009

one of the softess poems ever hautingly beautiful 10

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Shashendra Amalshan 12 August 2009

Very beautiful Fay.. These days I write those stupid rhyming ones... hey you come up with something like this 'Soft textured velvet is my mood today. It sings me memory-tunes of your words.'.... you poems are always music to the reader's ear indeed.. beautiful .....10 and I can give you more with lots of love shan

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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