Tuesday, May 15, 2007

Moonlight Comments

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Moonlight.
I reach for the beams of hopes & dreams. But the moon's high over my head. I can never reach that far.
It's hopeless.
My dreams flee and I chase them, yet they flutter like silken moths, out too far. Without hope, I fall through the darkness forever.
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Jaide Iris Lanzing
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Beautiful. "I reach for the beams of hope…" loved it.

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poetry lover 15 May 2007

very nicely written great job

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