“Hey, what do you think about morality in life”?
I was taken back on issue and felt touch of knife
The question was directly posed to me
I was writer yet not completely free
She was one of regular reader
But had reservation about order
The language and theme used in poem
As it was concerning to all of them
How can you go on them all?
To read face is beautiful call
If you can read each lines
That can be called as extra human
She is tough commando
With moments notice she can jump to go
With beautiful and caring heart
She looks kind and smart
I speak all the time with liberty
Not with eyes to look dirty
But with enough of freedom to tease
That makes me to feel at ease
Life is not that bad
You should never look sad
At the time when environment around is lovely
You should love and enjoy nicely
To love more is not to have sex
That may be degrading process
Love is to come near
Feel breath and beats closer
Great piece of art Anem JosephsLess than a minute ago I like how it started, intro is essential, I like the how you've put as a question, and the poem averall, great Comment 0
its ok chelsea langford4 minutes ago Not bad but I think some words are missing Comment +1
A question is asked and the narrator is answering No Name8 minutes ago The answer to the question at the beginning is quite confusing. Comment +1 ...
... Mary-Elin Rollins11 minutes ago I don't understand...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
“Hey, what do you think about morality in life”? I was taken back on issue and felt touch of knife