Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 686,221 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Morality In Life - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

“Hey, what do you think about morality in life”?
I was taken back on issue and felt touch of knife
The question was directly posed to me
I was writer yet not completely free

She was one of regular reader
But had reservation about order
The language and theme used in poem
As it was concerning to all of them

How can you go on them all?
To read face is beautiful call
If you can read each lines
That can be called as extra human

She is tough commando
With moments notice she can jump to go
With beautiful and caring heart
She looks kind and smart

I speak all the time with liberty
Not with eyes to look dirty
But with enough of freedom to tease
That makes me to feel at ease

Life is not that bad
You should never look sad
At the time when environment around is lovely
You should love and enjoy nicely

To love more is not to have sex
That may be degrading process
Love is to come near
Feel breath and beats closer


Comments about Morality In Life by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/17/2014 9:10:00 AM)

    Great piece of art

    Anem JosephsLess than a minute ago
    I like how it started, intro is essential, I like the how you've put as a question, and the poem averall, great
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/17/2014 9:10:00 AM)

    love real love

    Paul Rugio12 minutes ago
    cool
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/17/2014 9:09:00 AM)

    its ok

    chelsea langford4 minutes ago
    Not bad but I think some words are missing
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/17/2014 9:09:00 AM)

    A question is asked and the narrator is answering

    No Name8 minutes ago
    The answer to the question at the beginning is quite confusing.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/17/2014 9:08:00 AM)

    ...

    Mary-Elin Rollins11 minutes ago
    I don't understand...
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  • Gajanan Mishra (1/17/2014 8:58:00 AM)

    feel breath and beats closer, good one, thanks sir. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/17/2014 8:47:00 AM)

    “Hey, what do you think about morality in life”?
    I was taken back on issue and felt touch of knife
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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 17, 2014



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