Akhila Viswambharan


More Bliss... - Poem by Akhila Viswambharan

There's moonlight on us,
On the sandy beach,
Music blending behind in the sea!
Here I am, you with me,
Would you take a tight hug
And a warm kiss?
While you melt me like chocolate,
And I snuggle in your arms,
Lets stay like that forever,
With the wind in our ears,
Cold waves at our feet,
With us in eternity.


Comments about More Bliss... by Akhila Viswambharan

  • Shekhar Joshi (5/3/2009 2:22:00 PM)

    sweet, lovely poem.
    i liked it
    good work
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  • (4/30/2009 12:34:00 PM)

    I think the title should be Ultimate bliss? ..........................Good Write........... (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav Easwaran (4/28/2009 9:26:00 PM)

    good love poem...words warm and expressive...thanks, Akhi...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (4/27/2009 11:52:00 PM)

    beyond all flight
    With the wind in our ears,
    Cold waves at our feet,
    With us in eternity.
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  • (4/27/2009 11:04:00 PM)

    i c u in this poem and u are amazing! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 27, 2009



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