of course, you are right
about metrics and rhymes,
but in this simple form -
it reminds me of God.
and it showed so much love-
I forgot about rhyme,
and it gave me more Light,
that I wanted to thank!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thanks for this small, amazing poem which seems to be a lovely reply to the skeptics who voice their concern about purity of technical points in poetry. I love it. of course, you are right / about metrics and rhymes / but in this simple form - / it reminds me of God.