More Than Dreaming Poem by Mahfooz Ali

More Than Dreaming

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I search for the dark minded wonder,
will it appear before end?
All day long I simply ponder,
as I strain to comprehend.

Daily, life presents its routine
while society tells who I am.
Won't I let the true side be seen?
If I could only go that far.

Journey with me, down the path of life
as I search for any meaning.
The sights and sounds will replace my strife
as I see if there is more than dreaming.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 31 January 2009

pondering over, going far and far you will find the 'true side'...or relax a bit take an onion start peeling...you will find the end... the 'true side'...nothing except what was in the beginning...good thought provoking write...ten for you Mahfooz

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Lucknow (U.P.) India
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