Morning Poem by manaswini dash

Morning

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With soft footsteps,
the morning came
and wake me up
I looked at her.
she was looking so fresh,
with small dew drops,
scattered over her body.
she was looking so beautiful,
with the reddish sunlight
reflected on her.
Her eyes were beaming-
with giggling dreams,
that makes me thrilled and excited
With lots of-
hopes and aspirations,
I started climbing-
steps after steps,
to achieve my dreams.,
During the journey
I could not marked
when her figure changed,
from a glowing beauty-
to a pale faded shadow
and within twinkle of an eye,
before I could understand anything,
that shadow also vanished
from my sight.
And all my dreams
remained in halfway.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 06 August 2018

Her eyes were beaming- with giggling dreams, that makes me thrilled and excited With lots of- hopes and aspirations, ...........all your dreams cannot be on half way........wait for the next morn and you will experience the energy to achieve again..... go on building on it and you will be great......... thank u dear poetess. this is a beautiful meditation........ thank u. tony

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Manaswini Dash 07 August 2018

Thank you dear Tony for your nice comments. yes, I agree that we should not give up. I have already read your poem dancer becomes the dance and gave my comment on 7/5/2018.Probably you have not seen it.

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