Sunday, May 4, 2008

Morning Always Comes Too Soon Comments

Rating: 5.0

The morning always comes too soon,
when you are locked in loves embrace
You much prefer the gentle moon
to the suns bright shining face.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Joseph Daly 04 May 2008

This is soppy vor, but I like soppy. A lovely paced poem and the AB start BA end is a great twist.

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John Thorkild Ellison 04 May 2008

Another fine enjoyable poem, thanks Ivor! Best wishes, John.

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Vallerie Lobell 04 May 2008

how true these words....had we the power to hold back the dawn...beautiful poem...Vallerie Lobell

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Emancipation Planz 04 May 2008

another dreamy one... alas Monday morn and work is nearly here.... soon doomed... boo hoo! !

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