Santanu Nandi Purkayastha

Morning Energy

The morning fresh energy baths me,
And prepares for the day.
With the fresh air that passes by,
Make me fill the objective.
With your wish and kisses
Make me to pass the day,
With same energy and freshness.

Minute after minutes hour rolls.
Hour after hours day rolls.
Bit by bit with my effort,
I will progress and conquer all.
With little help, for those deserve,
I will open for them a horizon.
With my touch, thousand smile
When glitters all round,
I am blessed and energized,
And ready for a new mission.

With the marching age,
Let the child remain within.
Let it remain soft and tender,
And no complicity it should imbibe.
Let it bleed with others grief,
And filled with joy, when happiness around.
Let me sing in others rhythm,
And let others to embrace mine.

Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 18, 2013
Poem Edited: Saturday, September 28, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is regarding the positive energy. Positive energy develops positive thought and which help us to do constructive work for the people around and we also grow in this process.
One nice morning I have written the poem, siting in my balcony.
I dedicate this poem to the beautiful earth and to my love.

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (8/24/2015 9:51:00 PM)

    Let the child remain within.
    Let it remain soft and tender,
    And no complicity it should imbibe. i liked these lines in your poem.. yes keep your child and its smile intact. those who don't care for the inner child loses a lot in their normal life. it is true.

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  • Yash ShindeYash Shinde (3/14/2014 10:16:00 AM)

    highly energizing n encouraging poem, loved the way u expressed it.....lovely

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  • Dead Leaf (2/6/2014 4:07:00 AM)

    Beautiful lines strengthened with the power of energy..... Loved reading this.......


    -Sanu

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  • Beach GirlBeach Girl (10/22/2013 1:07:00 PM)

    This poem is very positive, full of life and energy. I liked it! !

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  • Santanu Nandi PurkayasthaSantanu Nandi Purkayastha (10/11/2013 12:36:00 PM)

    The poem speaks about positive energy.At first solar energy, then wind energy and finally wishes and kisses from his beloved energized him.The poem rotate around increasing the positive energy in him by doing good work for the people around and helping the people who really deserves.Like a child the poet need to have positive energy, where he can only think good about others and with the growing age he does not want the positive energy to replace by negative one.

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  • Neetha SasidharanNeetha Sasidharan (10/10/2013 9:16:00 AM)

    grt poem...kp going....

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  • Bri EdwardsBri Edwards (10/9/2013 12:30:00 AM)

    Make me fill the objective.
    With your wish and kisses....i wish i knew what you mean. it sounds interesting.

    if i don't pay too much attention to trying to understand the words or trying to think how i would write this differently, the poem has a nice feeling/flow/sound to it. i believe i follow the main points the author is making, but i believe english is not his first language and therefor there are, understandably, some wordings which i would not use. i have been speaking english as my only language for over sixty years and i still am not an expert, AND i still write/speak in some ways for which my english teachers would scold me!
    thanks for sharing. i especially enjoyed the following lines:

    With the marching age,
    Let the child remain within.
    Let it remain soft and tender,
    And no complicity it should imbibe.
    Let it bleed with others grief,
    And filled with joy, when happiness around. ...i suggest putting be in front of filled. :)

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  • Kaia Grønnbæck (10/8/2013 3:08:00 PM)

    I really liked the first part. The words mornings, fresh and energy......created a vibrant and happy mood: -)

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  • Swetha VanakayalapatiSwetha Vanakayalapati (10/4/2013 7:05:00 AM)

    its so serene and smooth very beautiful write...keep penning :)

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  • Sekharan PookkatSekharan Pookkat (10/3/2013 12:48:00 PM)

    It is nice to hear the birds songs early morning- early to bed and early to rise create positive energy

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (10/3/2013 11:27:00 AM)

    Loved it..it gives me energy for my morning tomorrow..i better sleep now hahaha...loved it you did a very good job! ! _Soul

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  • Heather WilkinsHeather Wilkins (9/28/2013 8:56:00 PM)

    positive energy leads to a positive life. let the child remain within let it remain soft and tender, I agree' good thoughts nice imagery

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  • Deepak MalhotraDeepak Malhotra (9/28/2013 2:21:00 AM)

    Thank you very much for sharing your poem
    This poem celebrates happiness,
    Inspire to have a optimistic approach towards life and love for nature

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  • Poetheart MorganPoetheart Morgan (9/27/2013 5:45:00 PM)

    Very nice Poet! ! ! ! Good luck on your day!

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  • Farah IlyasFarah Ilyas (9/27/2013 12:50:00 PM)

    I will open for them a horizon.
    With my touch, thousand smile..this is what poets/poetess do while spread the spell of their poetry, yeap morning has power in it to explore more world for us..great job

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  • Ruth Walters (9/27/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    very nice poem, well penned

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  • Sj HollandSj Holland (9/19/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    I like this:
    ...With the marching age,
    Let the child remain within.
    Let it remain soft and tender,
    And no complicity it should imbibe...

    Good luck!

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  • Santanu Nandi PurkayasthaSantanu Nandi Purkayastha (9/19/2013 8:53:00 AM)

    positive approach, honest and true regarding doing something for the people around.

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