Morning Experiences... Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Morning Experiences...

Rating: 5.0


Whisked face gets reddened,
next day really gets darkened,
night bathed mister gets tanned,
snow rolled damsel gets sickened,

He, the Sun God has emerged,
chasing away all old spirits,
the house lizards always agree,
a few return home to change,

Birds voices are fraudulent,
the passing clouds are wonderful,
curtains, the marching cars,
are squeaky, while hearts are racy,

Dishes on the plates and in bowls,
gone in within few minutes,
tips of the straw are strained,
when ants build their own homes.

Thursday, February 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mithilesh Yadav 19 February 2016

what a classical expression of morning........... your poem provokes the thought of morning at any moment of day or even in nights mam ji.. thanx for sharing

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 February 2016

Morning experiences in typical house hold routinely undergone by a lady of the house are wonderfully narrated. Thanks for sharing.10+ points.

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