Morning Rush At West Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Morning Rush At West

Rating: 3.5


Have to wake up,
before the tiredness,
of yesterdays fades away.

Loving spouse still at bed,
exhausted as usual,
crying baby in the crib.

Mounting clothes,
in the dryer,
cleaned dishes in the washer.

Have to put back,
where these belong,
but I am drowsy for long.

Waking alarms irritates,
brush and shower in minutes,
instant breakfast suffice.

Arms carry the crying baby,
elbow carries the baby bag,
Heart carries the sorrow.

Three of us set,
for regular journey,
baby at nanny, we at work.

The first hour,
after we wake up,
festivities at home.

Sometimes it thunders,
and rains from the eyes,
Morning rush manifests.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 27 February 2012

A panorama through window thought, a modern poem, depicts the reality, immensity is there in your poem and it sounds good, keep it up and i hope further more like this thanx 2 your nice creation, dear veeraiyah subbulakshmi/ please read my poems comment and vote

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Sankaran Ayya 27 February 2012

Sweet burdens of every morning and many a time bring tears in our eyes when you find difficult to cope up with the morning scores. Only ladies can portray these feelings in poems. Good poem Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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