Mother Poem by indira babbellapati

Mother

Rating: 5.0


a mother is a mother
what other word can
express the emotion
that wraps this word?

tell me if you find
a better expression
or a synonym from
your expanding lexicon

this i say in utmost love
for one taken for granted
as a young mind put it
'mother is a great feeling! '

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
*written on the request of a young poet, ms payal parande
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 19 July 2012

what other word shall we replace this word with? a loving and caring father, a sibling, a relative and anyone who behave as a mother ! Good poem on mother! 10 marks!

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Neela Nath Das 13 July 2012

A good tribute to Mother.wonderful.

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 11 July 2012

the ultimatum you give out in ur poems is always like a vision! !

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A beautiful slice of warm-heart expression...and, Indira you are a very good soul, and a finer one than me, as I too received this request and I passed on it, as I felt that this individual was not looking to learn, but instead to take an easy backdoor off the backs of one of us...However, that was a uncharacteristic snap-to-judgement onmy part, as I tapped the delet key...My penance now, is publicly admitting here for all to see, that my actions were not in line with how I was reared parentally or as a Christian....Thanks for the wake-up call!

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Shahzia Batool 10 July 2012

Expressions fail & lexicon surrenders!

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indira babbellapati

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visakhapatnam, india
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