Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,407 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***mother Universal***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

On sweet memory,
Dispelling darkness by motherhood
posterity reborn once again
To kiss holy dust divine

as Great Ganges flows yet offering
source and resource of living
Greens of grins to vine by humanity
Humility of sweet and nectar by refulgence

To Clones primordial ever and ever after
Life extends deep gratitude in prostration
by genuflection to crown of mothering

Oh holy mother –the genesis of universe
Coalescing frigid blue from reverie of slumber
from deep dream into semblance of truth
reality glorifies descends of stream continual

assonance of voice of quivering lips
under half opened veil
tears and smiles reel in her eyes
milling under half backed bone of love

and I do remember her pain thrust innocence
suffused with care and comforts of words wisdom
yet ever pervading beyond excellence of heaven.


Comments about ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***mother Universal***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! by Dr subhendu kar

  • (5/25/2010 4:39:00 PM)


    The 'source and resource of living' especially says it all. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/7/2010 6:05:00 AM)


    very nice complex metaphor
    ''from deep dream into semblance of truth
    reality glorifies descends of stream continual ''
    wonderful philosophical poem.
    10/10/10
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 4, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, August 20, 2010


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