Friday, October 7, 2016

Mothers' Perfume Comments

Rating: 3.8

My mothers' perfume.
The scents throughout the day are wondrous,
And not at all like fungus.
Filled with love and delight,
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Anna Atchison
COMMENTS
Elena Sandu 12 October 2016

Soul touching, wonderful creation, thank you, keep sharing dear Anna, I love your poems!

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Kathy Van Kurin 07 October 2016

Dear Anna Atchison, What a lovely poem in honour or your mom! It sure did warm my heart and reminds me of how fragrance is so important and gives us comfort in regard to home and family in particular a mom. Your rhyming was also really cute and whimsical. Loved it.

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Chinedu Dike 07 October 2016

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Anna.

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Tony Arnold 07 October 2016

you sound loving and sweet...but the fungus needs to go! better a line that doesn't rhyme than an off-key word.

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Matthew Holloway 07 October 2016

Nice poem thank you for sharing

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Anna Atchison

Anna Atchison

Emporia Kansas
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