Mouth Full, Sweeter Beats The Drum Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Mouth Full, Sweeter Beats The Drum



Mouth and maw made to relish rich food,
Who'd in this selfish world sound so rude?
Dough pasted upon mouth,
No more playing uncouth,
Lo, drums sing a sound of gratitude.
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Words well said | 26.11.14 |

Saturday, July 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: food,greed
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The truth is: mouth and maw made full, everyone begins to play a happy tune. On Indian drums called mridangam a paste of dough is applied to get a deeper, sharper sound.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 July 2019

So wisely delineated. Beautiful Limerick with fun and humor. Enjoyed.

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 July 2019

If a reader and a good poet enjoys a poem, that feels good, and let me also sound a word of gratitude like a mridangam.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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