The Dawn When Turns To Morn Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

The Dawn When Turns To Morn

Rating: 4.7

Yon there, the charioteer of Sun
Heralds the arrival of dawn,
Seen dawning her demur more smiles
That spread on to far spatial miles.
She inches close with a pleasant face,
Her beau, Sun, to embrace,
Ever so slowly baring her breasts
Approaching, slipping closer abreast,
And losing her self as a dawn
She merges— one with the sun.
Her pale orange radiance
Emits golden red hues at once,
And soon she's no more dawn,
Ah she's a young lady called morn.
Musings |44.08.2019|

Thursday, August 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dawn ,morning,sun
The beauty of an early dawn slowly turning into morn is worth seeing. It is mesmerising.
Valsa George 22 August 2019

The arrival of the dawn is imaginatively pictured as a bride shyly approaching her groom! Enjoyed this beautifully rhyming poem!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 August 2020

The wonders of an early dawn have been painted vividly and magnificently on the canvas of this marvelous poem. Beautifully crafted with compelling imagery.

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Anjandev Roy 16 March 2020

Such a wonderful write! anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 March 2020

Thanks for visiting and liking it.

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Bri Edwards 31 January 2020

" Name அரூண generally means Mythical charioteer of the sun or Dawn, is of Sanskrit, Indian origin" " Aruna" is " the name of the charioteer of Surya (Sun god) in Hinduism. He is the personification of the reddish glow of the rising Sun." I'm confused. Is Aruna the same as " dawn" ? No, i think not. One is male and one female. " " ? ? Did i hear mention of? Not a guy's, i hope. bri :)

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 January 2020

, I had explained in detail and then PH removed it all saying it is too long.... But why remove it altogether? Well, in short, Aruna is not to be pronounced like Arunaa. In Sanskrit each consonant need 'a' vowel a to make it complete. Name அரூண, does it mean Arun in Odia?

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Magadha Rani 21 January 2020

A beautiful poem sir ji. The real beauty of this poem lies in the opening two lines....loved it....10+++

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 January 2020

What begins well.... as they say, thank you

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 December 2019

A fabulous poem with great rhythm and rhyme sir! I sincerely admire the fathomless poetic beauty of this magnificent piece of work.... Full marks!

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 December 2019

Such generous comments, beyond my belief, thank you so much Dr Swain.

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