Urmi Tanna

Mr. Would Be! - Poem by Urmi Tanna

As your finger rolled down my curls,
my world, took a thousand whirls.
I slept on your lap
as you kissed my cheek.
You played the role that no one did.
Reel it was because you faded away
Soon I woke up
with a smile whole day!

Topic(s) of this poem: dream

Comments about Mr. Would Be! by Urmi Tanna

  • (5/1/2017 4:54:00 AM)

    Thank you all for the appreciations! 😊 (Report) Reply

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  • Siddartha Montik (5/1/2017 1:55:00 AM)

    Good narration of Soothing times.. and full laugh of a day! ! Thank you Poet for sharing! ! 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (4/27/2017 1:41:00 AM)

    @Urmi Tanna,
    It's a nice, sweet poem. Well done!
    'Soon I woke up
    with a smile whole day! ' - Wonderful!
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  • Rajnish Manga (4/21/2017 9:20:00 PM)

    Sweet and hauntingly romantic. Very well crafted. Thanks, Urmi. (Report) Reply

  • Jazib Kamalvi (4/21/2017 10:29:00 AM)

    Nice fingers of sleep. Thanks (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 21, 2017

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