Muddles Of Mind Poem by Fatema Khatun
Muddles Of Mind
Why it's endless
Lots of questions but
Still searching for the answer
Why did he make it so hopeless.
No one is here trustable here
The world is in need itself
People are in greed and foolishness,
But I'm just on my own empire
With my own principles.
Sometimes problems makes
To ask questions
But which is mine one is unsolvable
Thoughts ask this but
I know you have all the solutions.
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Last line of the poem: I know you have all the solutions. About Muddles of the mind.5*****
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3) usually I ignore such errors in a poem. Or, sometimes I point it out to the poet by a private mail, so that he/she may correct.. But here, the errors are too many
2) take this line: "No one is here trustable here".. Repeated word ‘here' indicates scant care in writing and polishing the poem. I can list more….
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I do not understand how this poem qualifies for Poem Of The Day! PoemHunter has made itself so silly and worthless. Every line of the poem has at least one error, grammatical or not…